Thursday, 22 May 2014

Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before  I  write. It was easy to think of the ideas that I did in the holidays. My plan and my story matches. It will help me if I use a plan again.


Blake
I saw  the army trucks.
File:"U.S.-built Army trucks
Mustache, Smiley, Happy
I saw a parade and there were army jeeps and one large army truck.
When I went to my nana's I saw the army trucks. They closed the road because the army trucks were parked all over the road. They were big and tall and strong and cool.

Monday, 19 May 2014

Making a Connection

I am learning to make a connection between myself and a character in the story. I  got  a lot better  at thinking about the story and characters. Next time I could compare more than one character in a story. It was easy.