Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before  I  write. It was easy to think of the ideas that I did in the holidays. My plan and my story matches. It will help me if I use a plan again.

Blake

I saw  the army trucks.

I saw a parade and there were army jeeps and one large army truck.

When I went to my nana's I saw the army trucks. They closed the road because the army trucks were parked all over the road. They were big and tall and strong and cool.

Making a Connection

I am learning to make a connection between myself and a character in the story. I  got  a lot better  at thinking about the story and characters. Next time I could compare more than one character in a story. It was easy. 

Good Work Award

I am proud of myself.