Thursday 22 May 2014

Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before  I  write. It was easy to think of the ideas that I did in the holidays. My plan and my story matches. It will help me if I use a plan again.


Blake
I saw  the army trucks.
File:"U.S.-built Army trucks
Mustache, Smiley, Happy
I saw a parade and there were army jeeps and one large army truck.
When I went to my nana's I saw the army trucks. They closed the road because the army trucks were parked all over the road. They were big and tall and strong and cool.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Well done. You have used ideas in your plan to write your story.

Sharon Harrison said...

You had such a lovely weekend with Nana and Pa - good describing words used in your story Blake - love Mum xx